Vision I gave you a 2. I want to see you create your own concept. This is someone else's vision that you took a beautiful photo of. While I would consider Shinobu to be a heavenly vision of beauty. I, feel this just doesn't have any of your own flavor. If someone else took this photo I wouldn't notice the difference. It doesn't feel like you left a your mark on this. Originality I gave you a 2, because this famous character wasn't created by you. For a character this popular if you want some serious points for a originality than take her to a place that wouldn't seem far-fetched. But stands out enough for us to say, " A place like that clearly wasn't in the story, but it seems believable do to the nature of the character". Please remember that Shinobu is an adult; while, she does have the body of a child she is still a full-fledged woman on the inside, so she has charm about her that you could to try to exploit with a darker a setting. Technique I gave you a 5, because I love the splendid blend of colors in the background that make your model pop. The way you setup the camera to make the background go out of focus only added to concept of the characters original design of mystique. I like how you used the donuts. They created depth, and a nice color palette that bounces the eyes from the street to your model. Impact I gave you a 4. There's room for improvement. Lack of originality and lack of vision hold you back. But your technique is wonderful, you made good choices regarding the lighting and the color palette, and you chose a cute model, so overall Impact is about a four.
it's okay, don't worry. thank you for it ^^ well, about the photo: it's a simple event-photo I took with the cosplayer in a city we both didn't know so we had some troubles finding a really good location like an abandoned building or so. But don't worry, on a real shooting with a Shinobu I would choose a better location for that version of her ^^d